This was my response from the Hopscotch LAB that I took part in. After choosing 3 objects, i created a narrative and linked them together as they all had links to fruit and vegetables (the spray bottle shaped as a pumpkin and the pen being orange).
Issues brought up
with this piece of work included that the piece looked too much like a still
life drawing, rather than 3 elements trying to work together as the task
instructed. Something more ‘jarring’ and less seamless would have been ideal.
For example, experimenting with scale and using views from outside rather than
3 indoor objects. In addition to this, my ideas for development were too linear
as I wanted to redo the painting but with colour, which was not pushing far
enough and would be repetitive. As a result i photographed different compositions of fruit and my two items in a bowl and produced a drawn response in this way instead. I had stitched these images together and created a long winding image that i painted.
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